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We live in two different worlds of grey.
I tried to combind them and let the colours run
I seek; succumb; become numb.

Salty water swells; you cry, tears of diamonds
I can blow them away, warmly,
from your flushed cheek.

So here we are,
staring at our feet.

I know she will always be the centre of your universe.
Her smile will always be so much more beautiful than mine,
Her soul will always vibrate brighter.

Thoughts twisting around in your mind
can you predict the next moment?

Imagine, lying beneath the blue sky,
embraced by  sunshine

Wishing our lives away
Leaving traces of diamonds on my fingertips.
Inspired by a friend, I haven't written anything in awhile due to lack of inspiration and talent, so I hope this okay.
It might not make sense, but it makes sense to me, so that's what matters right?

Image from google images.
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Chocban Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2006
You're really good at this
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FindTheJadeSatan Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2006
well hayley hayley HAYLEY!! hehe. You know I love everything you write but this one is special. And it's not only special because you wrote it and I read it ;) it's special cos I LOVE IT!!! muchly. It really flows. And I can relate to what you're trying to get out throught it. Keep writing haylz, it's about time you submitted a new poem.

love jade xxx
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killergardengnomes Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2006
Aw thanks..
lol I'm working on it.
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theteaparty Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2006   Writer
it gets the point ouy there beatifully with the images leaking from the words
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killergardengnomes Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2006
thankyou:)
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Chiaki136 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2006
That was stunning..
You painted a beautiful picture. It was pretty, sad, whimsical, and explanatory.
I'd know exactly how you feel if I was this guy reading this..
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killergardengnomes Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2006
Thanks, I thought it was kinda subtle in an obvious way.
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speed-of-dark Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2006
wow! dat is beeeeeeeeeaaaauuuuuuuuutiful! :+fav:
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killergardengnomes Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2006
thankyou! :)
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Silent-Martyr Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2006
Real nice, pretty imagery. :)
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